OK i liked the idea but i think you have a small problem, i did not like your respond like if a stranger came to our HQ you will let him go? no right you are going to kill him and next time try to find someone to help you acting 2 characters at same time is not good it will be harder on you and it wont give you a good RP act. But i like your efforts so you will get 1 Maltesini point reward and i hope you fix this and take my notes in your consider next time.
Looking forward to see your next Roleplay act, Underboss, Michael Corleaone(Nock_Out)