Ls-rcr Newspaper 11.12.2016

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CresP

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Post by CresP » December 11, 2016, 7:24 pm
Well done ,mate :)
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Post by Immortal » December 11, 2016, 8:18 pm
Good job, it looks awesome. But, your information about Army is false. John said that there weren't any promotions for the last two months not that there won't be.

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Post by Zoroark » December 12, 2016, 6:23 am
I like the layout just the portion of the title and logo are a bit big and the placement of the articles could be better. If you do big logos than have the 1st page full of logos and teasers to make the viewers interested in the newspaper (even if it's not a real one you can still make it fun by having a teaser like "Did John really say the army was getting removed?")

Then you have the article saying that the rumor isn't true along with updates about army


That's page 2 (all the important info like updates, features added to the server along with new/ modified rules and groups plus announcements and such) then page 3 would consist of misc stuff like player highlights a few dumb jokes along with some world news and Le poem to wrap the paper up.


Just an idea.
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Post by Robin » December 12, 2016, 6:26 am
Immortall2 wrote:
Good job, it looks awesome. But, your information about Army is false. John said that there weren't any promotions for the last two months not that there won't be.
I've stated that twice too, once in public and once in the hidden section.
The public one got deleted and the hidden one got ignored...
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Post by Geri » December 12, 2016, 12:42 pm
We've realized the false information mistake, but there is nothing we can do for it now.

We will be more careful next time, sorry for it.

Thanks!
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Post by sharwin » December 12, 2016, 2:29 pm
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That was really nice. Congratulations guys keep it up.
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Post by Abstract » December 12, 2016, 6:18 pm
Cool.

I like the way you've made it into the image, the colors and stuff is really simple but looks very pleasing. Good job, bru.

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Post by Ty$on » December 13, 2016, 2:08 am
Thank you for encouraging us
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Post by Brutavious » December 13, 2016, 7:02 am
That is great. Keep it up! :)
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