Poem

[Deadly]

Ya'll acting tough, you ain't smooth you're just too rough
Now you guys made me sick, and surprisingly throb like a dick
By your so called "rap", you ain't know how to, rather, just go fap
Ya'll flapping like a faggotic bird, laying eggs moans can be heard
I don't see any rhyme, just your enthusiasm, no this ain't your time to shine
We're rapping here, giving puns, I dont know what you ate to get yourself to the topic drugs and guns
You all acting like you're all fed, didnt you forget you are as good as brain dead?
As I read your puns, all I see is that it really kills, because I can't find any of the skills
You've been trying to show, all this time you still ain't got no blow
Now, yeah I'm pro, go scavenge some raps as a crow.

hahaIs this rap? rhyming "high" to "blind"? damn this is crap
Oh yeah someone already gave this pun, dont kill yourself yet, we're still having fun
I see how shallow your talents are, still give them a shot, anyway you're not a far
But, i'd give you a tip, use your lip, shake your hip, and go find some dick to sip
Ya'll bastards, acting like the fucktards, all of you are retards, leotards, skinning like a leopard, y plus "jeopard" is what you give in this boulevard, fucktard

Shitty ass niggers, more like the beggars, shitty censored, you just got punt, in this hunt, youre a taunt, thats what you want, rant, i juat really cant
Everytime I read your paragraph, I just cant seem to stop myself from a little laugh

oh boy, you got too excited after you said 2 words that rhyme,
now you're bringin' all that rhyme from google,
seems like me and that fake gangsta have something in common,
we can spit shit,
doesn't matter if it's good or not,
better than gettin' it from a rhyme site.
you represent the new school, we are the old school,
it would be better to go back to your room and play a video game,
cause you'll regret every word you'll say, you're lame.
i'm still takin' it easy on you
i think you're not ready to see the demon unleashed in that you might sue
you don't wanna mess with me boy,
like i said before, i can destroy you like a fucking toy

[Gangsta19]

Is this rap? rhyming "high" to "blind"? damn this is crap
Oh yeah someone already gave this pun, dont kill yourself yet, we're still having fun
I see how shallow your talents are, still give them a shot, anyway you're not a far
But, i'd give you a tip, use your lip, shake your hip, and go find some dick to sip
Ya'll bastards, acting like the fucktards, all of you are retards, leotards, skinning like a leopard, y plus "jeopard" is what you give in this boulevard, fucktard

Shitty ass niggers, more like the beggars, shitty censored, you just got punt, in this hunt, youre a taunt, thats what you want, rant, i juat really cant
Everytime I read your paragraph, I just cant seem to stop myself from a little laugh

boy,your bars are whack ,
i know crackheads who spit better rap so just shut your trap
can't you read between the lines and pronounce the syllables?
i fucking spit miracles when i play on words
your rhymes are googled,mines top of the dome
it's time for me to take the throne,come and spray you with the chrome
and go home to my home-grown plants,i spit the kind of shit to make your bitch wanna dance cause i flow freely,
now you try to be me,but there's no one out there beside zoroark to beat me in this poetry
don't spit at me if you do not practice otherwise i'll leave you like a bitch with half-cut-tits
screaming while i cut you up to bits ,tear open your lips fill your mouth with dicks
yo i better leave it at this before i get you pissed

[Juice.]

Nigga what is this? You copying and pastin? That's is what's called wastin yo time, because that right there has already died. The ryme was whack and the lyracs where lame, copying and pasting means you've lost the game, the battle is over and you've already lost there's no point in pretending your boss, because that disclaim comes with a cost, the hole that goes deeper then your pockets can hold and you've already been provin to be joke, so wake up boy this shits getting old.

what is this?
You suck at this, so take a seat bro.
before I reach fo, and let that heat go.
you can get shot early morning, no Ebro
I got a gun soo big, man its totally illegal.
n with it I'm known to X men like Magneto!
You honestly should have stayed incognito.
now ima send u up to the sky like a eagle.
I will bag u for the cheese, no Cheetos!
boy please, bro your bars stink like Frito's!
you dead even if u "try angles" like Doritos.
Your bars crap and belong where pee go.
Glock under the pea coat, say ur peace bro.
I usually charge a fee tho... but
You broke so i killed you for free though.

[Tyreethetruth4]

My boy juice, still killin yall in 2016
Most yall niggas sound like preteens
Now I'm in here, in the mix
Most you niggas built like sticks
Not a bone in ya body, mushy like oatmeal
Like OG loc, Get a rhymebook to steal

[Zoroark]

You can't rap for shit
go back to sucking on yo mamas tit
you ain't even grown.
Moan in pain is all you gain, you never learn and are so lame
get out of the game.
It's too hard for you, sick with the flu cause that's what you sound like going left of the turn pike cause you ain't right,
Failed elementary school getting used like a tool you fool could left when you had the chance
but I'm not nice I'm cruel, enough to make you drink fuel. Set you on fire while you suck on dat pacifier.


Come to the hood trying to act g you get shot for free so don't step to me, on the street cause you gonna get beat. I make messes cause i ain't neat let the cops come and they'll release. No jail can contain cause I got the name of fame so it's you who better refrain, get on the train to Maine if you still gotta brain.

[Indognito]

Nigga what is this? You copying and pastin? That's is what's called wastin yo time, because that right there has already died. The ryme was whack and the lyracs where lame, copying and pasting means you've lost the game, the battle is over and you've already lost there's no point in pretending your boss, because that disclaim comes with a cost, the hole that goes deeper then your pockets can hold and you've already been provin to be joke, so wake up boy this shits getting old.

what is this?
You suck at this, so take a seat bro.
before I reach fo, and let that heat go.
you can get shot early morning, no Ebro
I got a gun soo big, man its totally illegal.
n with it I'm known to X men like Magneto!
You honestly should have stayed incognito.
now ima send u up to the sky like a eagle.
I will bag u for the cheese, no Cheetos!
boy please, bro your bars stink like Frito's!
you dead even if u "try angles" like Doritos.
Your bars crap and belong where pee go.
Glock under the pea coat, say ur peace bro.
I usually charge a fee tho... but
You broke so i killed you for free though.

You call me broke yet you're the one with no dough, get outta here with that wack ass flow, it's like a drunk on the streets runnin off the road, I suggest you fix that before you're fans realize you blow, you're perpetrating like you hard but you couldn't be G you don't even hold a candle to me, cause I'm you're worse nightmare out in the flesh, don't test the best of the best, I've been known for turning niggas out on the streets beating you up and stepping on you're face with my cleets. I think you remember the stains in your sheats from the last time you tryed to step to me. you better run because you cannot hide, ill sniff you out by the scent of you're lies, you might as well wait for you're time to come because there's nothing you can do to stop me from comin. It's too late to turn back now because you done fucked up I'mma hit you harder then a truck, I'm like a train I can't be stopped that's more compared to your jammed glock. look at the clock, your time is up you better get ready become I'm gone duff you up.

[Zoroark]

Off topic

I expected this topic to die before page 3 when I originally posted it XD

I bumped it only because I had material for the bump that one time. XD

[Gangsta19]

Off topic

I expected this topic to die before page 3 when I originally posted it XD

I bumped it only because I had material for the bump that one time. XD

Won't let it die without at least 20 pages,i've been waiting for a topic like this for years


OT:

Walking the streets of Los Santos
Chilling in Grove colors,shooting up some Vagos
We run the streets,but moved out of the Ghettos
Up North we also run the casinos
But don't stick your nose,
where it doesn't belong
Business is business,you'll be dead wrong
If you think otherwise or try to act the "smart guys"
Assassins in disguise as one of your very own guys
By the sound of a gun
Will take away the life of your loved one
In front of your very own eyes,so be advised
Self made men from the streets of Ganton
Coming over to drive by you,while speakers blasting "Straight 'outta Compton"
You'll be lucky if you survive,better dive to the ground when you hear the sound
And watch your hood son,cause we're taking it over
Don't get caught walking the wrong street
Or you'll run the street of 'no leaf clover'
Once you hear the TEC 9 spray,it's 'GAME OVER'

[Naruk]

oh boy, you got too excited after you said 2 words that rhyme,
now you're bringin' all that rhyme from google,
seems like me and that fake gangsta have something in common,
we can spit shit,
doesn't matter if it's good or not,
better than gettin' it from a rhyme site.
you represent the new school, we are the old school,
it would be better to go back to your room and play a video game,
cause you'll regret every word you'll say, you're lame.
i'm still takin' it easy on you
i think you're not ready to see the demon unleashed in that you might sue
you don't wanna mess with me boy,
like i said before, i can destroy you like a fucking toy

Hahaha, you really did make me laugh like hell, from the bed, guess what I just literaly fell
I didn't your dumb as fuck, dude you now better find some luck
Cause I aint got some toleration, to the likes of you, crapshits of the nation, occasion, implantation of nuclear bomb will happen to your location, damnation, forever I will fuck your life like a recitation
Fuck you just made me cringe, google? boogle! you're just to dumble, stupid, oh wonderful cupid, please arrow his head, destroy all the lipid.
Underestimation? inflation, your head is so big it needs a deflation.
I see you judge, like what the fudge, you cant accept my skill? go get a rope and do some /kill
Now I see you ain't got some blow, that's why you can never really show, just that how shitty you are and opposite to pro
Afain, google? Jingle! I pray for santa you'll get a fiddle, play some music and learn some rhyme, time, dayyym, get some lime
Site? Kite! to the likes of you I don't wanna fight, level? shrivel, just got down from your level, just to mark, shark is what you bumped, humped, your life will be dumped
The google you mean, to my vocabs, is "talent", covalent, insullent, perhaps you just bent. Cause I know you can't rhyme and play some words, swords you better play swords! Dont push your something you're not good at, cuz you seem like a rat, a ragged cat, a censored that's fat.

Gansta? Monsta! I am the monsta and he is the ponsta! If were to film, I'd be the cock, even if he was the pussy made of rock. That's how hard I am, now don't compare me to something like a pussy, cussy, little iggy hussy. Now taste my venom of the king cobra, now you gotta take off now your bra! Gonna squeeze your tits down to the glands of the mammary, the pappary, no matter what you are I'm sure you're fucked, sucked you're like a leech that sucked. Well, you're a leech and to suck is what you only know, no! just no! You'll never get on my level you ragged rat, I'm the cat, and we'll play hide and seek until you all wanna squeak.

#Hahaha peace, tbh lol google that's for dumbs

[Naruk]

Oh damn, I forgot to thank, now let me get my crown cause I'm up the rank!
To google is what my skills you compare, now you just flattered my hair.
"Keybinds", telling this to 133 wpm-er, you just made my liver go thicker!
Thank you, thank you, and another thank you. Now you just witnessed me rap like the google, I can't seem to stop myself to giggle! wiggle! dance like a weedle!

Really? you call yourselves able to spit shit, or you guys are the shits itself? Oooh what a critical hit!?
Oh dayumn what a self proclaim! all I see in your wordplay is that it's lame
Now you talking about schools? Can't get enough laughfter from you fools
You can't do poem, let me tell you yan just do my hair with a comb
Woah, low, your skills are too croo, boo! You're stull is sticky and a smelly goo, coming out from your asses like a shelly shoo!
Now, getting down to your level was worth my time, you made me laugh, but seriously, poem is not a poem without a rhyme.