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I have blood that flows through my body like a raging flood, a voice that can't be silenced even in a deep pit of mud, in a rut that I must dig myself out of. Talent is the key that no one else but me sees in myself sitting on the top shelf above the clouds. Am I proud? I wish that I could say so but I go with the flow to grow with experience. It ain't easy to be me deflecting bullets with me teeth while trying not to drown in the water beneath where you can't see down, no land to be found and sharks all around. One day I'll break free, get out of the sea and continue to be me.



This poem uses metaphors and similes because I love making the audience think. For example I don't actually stop bullets with my teeth I just say that because I get out if some shitty situations for being silent.

Anyways, share your poetry or raps if you rap.


Side note: Long ago I rapped for money so I could buy junk food. I am not that great at it anymore but back then I was able to win some bets.

Zoroark wrote:

I have blood that flows through my body like a raging flood, a voice that can't be silenced even in a deep pit of mud, in a rut that I must dig myself out of. Talent is the key that no one else but me sees in myself sitting on the top shelf above the clouds. Am I proud? I wish that I could say so but I go with the flow to grow with experience. It ain't easy to be me deflecting bullets with me teeth while trying not to drown in the water beneath where you can't see down, no land to be found and sharks all around. One day I'll break free, get out of the sea and continue to be me.

This one is pretty cool!

[Lsrcr]Robin wrote:

Zoroark wrote:

I have blood that flows through my body like a raging flood, a voice that can't be silenced even in a deep pit of mud, in a rut that I must dig myself out of. Talent is the key that no one else but me sees in myself sitting on the top shelf above the clouds. Am I proud? I wish that I could say so but I go with the flow to grow with experience. It ain't easy to be me deflecting bullets with me teeth while trying not to drown in the water beneath where you can't see down, no land to be found and sharks all around. One day I'll break free, get out of the sea and continue to be me.

This one is pretty cool!

Thank you, now you see why my name before tag was WritingZoroark LOL

Zoroark wrote:

Thank you, now you see why my name before tag was WritingZoroark LOL

Easter-egg found.

[Lsrcr]Robin wrote:

Zoroark wrote:

Thank you, now you see why my name before tag was WritingZoroark LOL

Easter-egg found.

:3 XD

boooo get off the stage! *Throws tomatoes glass bottles and cans at you.*


Im kidding, it was interesting. XD

Very well done! I really like it, forum PMing you something.

Thanks :3

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