S.W.A.T. Application: Grievous

[Grievous]

In-Game Name: Grievous
Score: 2159
Your Timezone (GMT): GMT+0 (Lisbon Time)
/taze Score: 670
/ar Score: 642

Proof of Score and Status:



Reason: I am a very active player, I love you all and thought the greatest way to show my love for you was to apply to SWAT. Please, make me a happy person, I know you all love me because we talk about that almost everyday in-game.
I have very good skills and I'm willing to use them to help SWAT.
We must protect Los Santos, it is the home of CJ's cousin, my dearest friend, and everyday I fear for his life so I can't sleep knowing that his life is in danger.

Kisses, Rose

[Aleksa]

In-Game Name: Grievous
Score: 2159
Your Timezone (GMT): GMT+0 (Lisbon Time)
/taze Score: 670
/ar Score: 642

Proof of Score and Status:



Reason: I am a very active player, I love you all and thought the greatest way to show my love for you was to apply to SWAT. Please, make me a happy person, I know you all love me because we talk about that almost everyday in-game.
I have very good skills and I'm willing to use them to help SWAT.
We must protect Los Santos, it is the home of CJ's cousin, my dearest friend, and everyday I fear for his life so I can't sleep knowing that his life is in danger.

Kisses, Rose

Firstly, you haven't came back from the inactivity yet
Secondly, the reason has to be full four lines
thirdly, you are missing something important

Re-read the rules, and wait for the commander's reply. Thank you.

[Grievous]

What? I'm sorry but i'm always on the server, but i'm usually inside the house because I have to take care of CJ's cousin..He can't play by himself. Please accept me, i'm very skilled and I must enter to honor my friend jaredo leto, also known has lastboyevilgirl99 a great great man.
Please, i'm warning you, if you don't accept me...I'll have to call OrlandoCosta..I'm sorry...
Orlando and D.coelho95 will know about this..

Kisses,
Rose

[Aleksa]

What? I'm sorry but i'm always on the server, but i'm usually inside the house because I have to take care of CJ's cousin..He can't play by himself. Please accept me, i'm very skilled and I must enter to honor my friend jaredo leto, also known has lastboyevilgirl99 a great great man.
Please, i'm warning you, if you don't accept me...I'll have to call OrlandoCosta..I'm sorry...
Orlando and D.coelho95 will know about this..

Kisses,
Rose

I hope you don't troll here, but I also don't wanna spam the application, but re-read the rules, buddy, it will help you a lot and a lot.
About Orlando and D.coelho, they can help you improve your application.

[Grievous]

Oh ok.. sorry it's just that I miss my friends :'(

Please, have you heard of OrlandoCosta? I don't know where he is and I need to talk to him about a very important thing. Please any help would be helpful.

P.S.: Accept me pls, I know the rules

[Aleksa]

End of the discussion, troller

This is not 'The Bar'.

// last post here

[Grievous]

no please.....
I must find Orlando..

[Kaosx234]

Let's not turn this into chat area.

Grievous, you didn't make a valid SWAT application, therefore,
Denied
You can reapply in 3 days if you wish so (24th of Nov).