Poem

[Zoroark]

I have blood that flows through my body like a raging flood, a voice that can't be silenced even in a deep pit of mud, in a rut that I must dig myself out of. Talent is the key that no one else but me sees in myself sitting on the top shelf above the clouds. Am I proud? I wish that I could say so but I go with the flow to grow with experience. It ain't easy to be me deflecting bullets with me teeth while trying not to drown in the water beneath where you can't see down, no land to be found and sharks all around. One day I'll break free, get out of the sea and continue to be me.



This poem uses metaphors and similes because I love making the audience think. For example I don't actually stop bullets with my teeth I just say that because I get out if some shitty situations for being silent.

Anyways, share your poetry or raps if you rap.


Side note: Long ago I rapped for money so I could buy junk food. I am not that great at it anymore but back then I was able to win some bets.

[Robin]

I have blood that flows through my body like a raging flood, a voice that can't be silenced even in a deep pit of mud, in a rut that I must dig myself out of. Talent is the key that no one else but me sees in myself sitting on the top shelf above the clouds. Am I proud? I wish that I could say so but I go with the flow to grow with experience. It ain't easy to be me deflecting bullets with me teeth while trying not to drown in the water beneath where you can't see down, no land to be found and sharks all around. One day I'll break free, get out of the sea and continue to be me.

This one is pretty cool!

[Zoroark]

I have blood that flows through my body like a raging flood, a voice that can't be silenced even in a deep pit of mud, in a rut that I must dig myself out of. Talent is the key that no one else but me sees in myself sitting on the top shelf above the clouds. Am I proud? I wish that I could say so but I go with the flow to grow with experience. It ain't easy to be me deflecting bullets with me teeth while trying not to drown in the water beneath where you can't see down, no land to be found and sharks all around. One day I'll break free, get out of the sea and continue to be me.

This one is pretty cool!

Thank you, now you see why my name before tag was WritingZoroark LOL

[Robin]

Thank you, now you see why my name before tag was WritingZoroark LOL

Easter-egg found.

[Zoroark]

Thank you, now you see why my name before tag was WritingZoroark LOL

Easter-egg found.

:3 XD

[Indognito]

boooo get off the stage! *Throws tomatoes glass bottles and cans at you.*


Im kidding, it was interesting. XD

[Draco]

Very well done! I really like it, forum PMing you something.

[Zoroark]

Thanks :3

[Lolmomlol]

wat

[Gangsta19]

I love poems with deeper meaning,well done Zoroark!
here's a little something i came up with:



Is life Heaven,Hell or a just game?
Because dead or alive for you i'm the same
I close my eyes and let go of my body
I'm all numb like i'm dumb-drunk off bacardi
Laying cold on the ground completely lifeless
Letting my soul give in to the darkness
All the disappoitment anger and resentment
Thinking a while back when i thought i was heaven-sent
Just a kid alone in the street ready to represent

How did i grow the Devil's wings on my back?
Maybe i had to,because i had nobody watching my back
All i had was my shadow guarding me and my "gat"
Paranoid looking over my shoulders
Inside a battlefiend and i'm the only soldier
Marching uphill to my destiny,annihilating the enemy
they wish death upon me and hoping i don't succeed
that's why i stay high off this weed,it got me praying like a mantis
because if i pull the trigger i can blame it on the cannabis
So many questions aimed upwards towards The Maker
Still no answers,maybe i'll ask nicer sometime later
Until then i know that i'm no longer by myself
I overcame hell and i'm no longer concerned about my wealth
As brief as i lived i've been through a lot
Now i can rest in peace and let my body rot