Poem

[Indognito]

I love poems with deeper meaning,well done Zoroark!
here's a little something i came up with:



Is life Heaven,Hell or a just game?
Because dead or alive for you i'm the same
I close my eyes and let go of my body
I'm all numb like i'm dumb-drunk off bacardi
Laying cold on the ground completely lifeless
Letting my soul give in to the darkness
All the disappoitment anger and resentment
Thinking a while back when i thought i was heaven-sent
Just a kid alone in the street ready to represent

How did i grow the Devil's wings on my back?
Maybe i had to,because i had nobody watching my back
All i had was my shadow guarding me and my "gat"
Paranoid looking over my shoulders
Inside a battlefiend and i'm the only soldier
Marching uphill to my destiny,annihilating the enemy
they wish death upon me and hoping i don't succeed
that's why i stay high off this weed,it got me praying like a mantis
because if i pull the trigger i can blame it on the cannabis
So many questions aimed upwards towards The Maker
Still no answers,maybe i'll ask nicer sometime later
Until then i know that i'm no longer by myself
I overcame hell and i'm no longer concerned about my wealth
As brief as i lived i've been through a lot
Now i can rest in peace and let my body rot

I agree, also nice poem I enjoyed reading it.

[Zoroark]

I love poems with deeper meaning,well done Zoroark!
here's a little something i came up with:



Is life Heaven,Hell or a just game?
Because dead or alive for you i'm the same
I close my eyes and let go of my body
I'm all numb like i'm dumb-drunk off bacardi
Laying cold on the ground completely lifeless
Letting my soul give in to the darkness
All the disappoitment anger and resentment
Thinking a while back when i thought i was heaven-sent
Just a kid alone in the street ready to represent

How did i grow the Devil's wings on my back?
Maybe i had to,because i had nobody watching my back
All i had was my shadow guarding me and my "gat"
Paranoid looking over my shoulders
Inside a battlefiend and i'm the only soldier
Marching uphill to my destiny,annihilating the enemy
they wish death upon me and hoping i don't succeed
that's why i stay high off this weed,it got me praying like a mantis
because if i pull the trigger i can blame it on the cannabis
So many questions aimed upwards towards The Maker
Still no answers,maybe i'll ask nicer sometime later
Until then i know that i'm no longer by myself
I overcame hell and i'm no longer concerned about my wealth
As brief as i lived i've been through a lot
Now i can rest in peace and let my body rot

That's awesome man :3

[Vinny_Chenzo]

I'm gonna slash n gash
cut another hole in your ass
I spill blood on the walls
and play tennis with your balls.
hear the phone ring don't answer the calls
I'm gonna slit your throat, fuck you like a goat,peel your foreskin off,and make a winter coat.
peace!
-killer

"that was the I'll est rhyme I ever heard sooooon aaaagahahahahahhahahha"
-shorty

what movie???? can you guess don't be cheap and use Google it's an easy one. xD I know you probably know this zoroark

[Zoroark]

I have a bad memory but those look familiar Vinny. XD

[Zoroark]

Bump this shit with my pumped up kicks, everyone turns away cause they know who to not fuck with. Don't wanna play tricks, going hardcore on the floor till you can't take it anymore and get soar with the bacon as the lore, muscles getting torn. It's a shame that I ain't built right but at least I can fight if I need to get right or deliver, a punishing blow to the liver and I keep going because I am no quitter.


At least I bumped it and stayed on topic :3

[Gangsta19]

Since it's bumped with a "diss" i'll act like it was aimed at me and i'll respond

You better watch out with glass jaw of yours cause i'll pop it and you'll drop it,get knocked the fuck out of course
I'm fed up with the hatred,i'm steaming mad
bitch i've obtained everything you wish you could've had!
Now i'm running wild,my screws are all loose ,better be careful or find yourself hanging from a noose or make me pull out this deuce and spray the walls with red juice
So as long as i do damage i will manage to go on a rampage like a wild animal,you're my victim i'm a cannibal in a carnival full of people,when i lose control you'll be witness to the pure evil,you suckers be equal,i'm born to be free as an eagle
Putting no limitations on my mind,you get left behind because you're blind to the truth with that narrow mind and you find yourself stuck,because you suck,you're a mutt,come around and go around you still get fucked up,you get popped,one phone call your throat is cut,slut,imma tell you what,i'm better off left alone cause i'm evil to the bone also prone to heavy artillery,this shit is elementary,damaging you mentally you don't want no beef with me!


Please don't take this personal,i just wrote whatever was floating on my mind at the moment

[Zoroark]

Since it's bumped with a "diss" i'll act like it was aimed at me and i'll respond

You better watch out with glass jaw of yours cause i'll pop it and you'll drop it,get knocked the fuck out of course
I'm fed up with the hatred,i'm steaming mad
bitch i've obtained everything you wish you could've had!
Now i'm running wild,my screws are all loose ,better be careful or find yourself hanging from a noose or make me pull out this deuce and spray the walls with red juice
So as long as i do damage i will manage to go on a rampage like a wild animal,you're my victim i'm a cannibal in a carnival full of people,when i lose control you'll be witness to the pure evil,you suckers be equal,i'm born to be free as an eagle
Putting no limitations on my mind,you get left behind because you're blind to the truth with that narrow mind and you find yourself stuck,because you suck,you're a mutt,come around and go around you still get fucked up,you get popped,one phone call your throat is cut,slut,imma tell you what,i'm better off left alone cause i'm evil to the bone also prone to heavy artillery,this shit is elementary,damaging you mentally you don't want no beef with me!


Please don't take this personal,i just wrote whatever was floating on my mind at the moment

I don't take these personally XD they are just fun. I used to do this with people I would hang with. Never took any of it to heart because its just meant for fun also to get creative. Also it has no real meaning so yeah.


Steppin wrong hood was your first mistake, now its your life I must take, no second chances for a fool, stomp your face in to leave the mark of my shoe. I'm not cruel because you earned it, dead bodies everywhere because they deserved it.

Mark of the chief is the blood of my enemies on my feet. I don't even have to creep because everywhere I'm VIP. All the land you can see is owned by me. Your riches are a single penny compared to the riches I keep. Let this knowledge seep and if your wise admit defeat for I have won before the battle has even begun, all your homies at the end of my gun. Its fun to win, let's the games begin.

[Gangsta19]

I don't take these personally XD they are just fun. I used to do this with people I would hang with. Never took any of it to heart because its just meant for fun also to get creative. Also it has no real meaning so yeah.


Steppin wrong hood was your first mistake, now its your life I must take, no second chances for a fool, stomp your face in to leave the mark of my shoe. I'm not cruel because you earned it, dead bodies everywhere because they deserved it.

Mark of the chief is the blood of my enemies on my feet. I don't even have to creep because everywhere I'm VIP. All the land you can see is owned by me. Your riches are a single penny compared to the riches I keep. Let this knowledge seep and if your wise admit defeat for I have won before the battle has even begun, all your homies at the end of my gun. Its fun to win, let's the games begin.

The game is on homie,it was a warning shot at first since you don't really know me,i'm not the one to shoot you behind the back,warrior,always packing a gat' ,alpha wolf,i'm the leader of the pack,have your ass get smacked turned into a snack for the rest of the pack,canvas sack on your head and headed to the woods with the other wolfs to cut you off like a mutated third arm,yes homie i'm heavily armed,bombing your hood like it was Vietnam,so be alarmed,be warned,coz' when i come to do bodily harm you better invest your riches to protect the bitches you call your hood-bodyguards
spitting fire like i'm hellbound,you knocked at the wrong door and it's me who you found,wanted beef homie? let's do it pound for pound
get your head spinning around without making a sound,you'll be laying on the ground
planting trotyl on your hood,have your homies laying still after the explosion and leave your hood rotting from the corrosion,you can't grasp the notion of my complex mind,your little hood rats need to find a new place to stay cause i come and slay any censored that's on my way,i don't play to win homie but i'm not wired to lose ,take the advice and duck when i let loose with the UZI,coz later i'll be chilling with my two bitches in the jacuzzi,named Paula and Suzie,and you'll be,somewhere on that mess laying with the rest,six bullets on your chest,still wanna be my guest?


p.s. that was tight Zoroark! And i'm really glad somebody finally doesn't take this shit serious

[Mega115]

Thank you, now you see why my name before tag was WritingZoroark LOL

Easter-egg found.

[Geri]

Ok guys i cant handle it anymore my turn now to make a poem

Yo, mate i remember when we're kids,
that we never messed with this,
this was evil for us,
and we were afraid from it,
but once we get older,
our think changes a lot,
we get more brave and smart,
we like our talk,
we don't care what other say,
we think we are the king.
But a mature guy says,
that you're nothing accept a human.
This thing is painful, but we don't understand,
it is dangerous, but not if we use it,
it hurts us till to death,
but for is it's too late.


I just made this now from my creative mind ^^!