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Post by Zoroark » March 8, 2016, 12:41 pm
Gangsta19 wrote:
Zoroark wrote:
I don't take these personally XD they are just fun. I used to do this with people I would hang with. Never took any of it to heart because its just meant for fun also to get creative. Also it has no real meaning so yeah.


Steppin wrong hood was your first mistake, now its your life I must take, no second chances for a fool, stomp your face in to leave the mark of my shoe. I'm not cruel because you earned it, dead bodies everywhere because they deserved it.

Mark of the chief is the blood of my enemies on my feet. I don't even have to creep because everywhere I'm VIP. All the land you can see is owned by me. Your riches are a single penny compared to the riches I keep. Let this knowledge seep and if your wise admit defeat for I have won before the battle has even begun, all your homies at the end of my gun. Its fun to win, let's the games begin.
The game is on homie,it was a warning shot at first since you don't really know me,i'm not the one to shoot you behind the back,warrior,always packing a gat' ,alpha wolf,i'm the leader of the pack,have your ass get smacked turned into a snack for the rest of the pack,canvas sack on your head and headed to the woods with the other wolfs to cut you off like a mutated third arm,yes homie i'm heavily armed,bombing your hood like it was Vietnam,so be alarmed,be warned,coz' when i come to do bodily harm you better invest your riches to protect the bitches you call your hood-bodyguards
spitting fire like i'm hellbound,you knocked at the wrong door and it's me who you found,wanted beef homie? let's do it pound for pound
get your head spinning around without making a sound,you'll be laying on the ground
planting trotyl on your hood,have your homies laying still after the explosion and leave your hood rotting from the corrosion,you can't grasp the notion of my complex mind,your little hood rats need to find a new place to stay cause i come and slay any censored that's on my way,i don't play to win homie but i'm not wired to lose ,take the advice and duck when i let loose with the UZI,coz later i'll be chilling with my two bitches in the jacuzzi,named Paula and Suzie,and you'll be,somewhere on that mess laying with the rest,six bullets on your chest,still wanna be my guest?


p.s. that was tight Zoroark! And i'm really glad somebody finally doesn't take this shit serious :mrgreen:

In used to having to keep mine short XD
How could you take a joke dis rap serious? Also thanks yours are pretty good too :3

Comming from the side we ride to victory, pissen over your body while you layen in misery. Last chance to say sorry but I won't accept. My skill is beyond adept, the master if my kind in my prime. While you droppen dimes I'm droppen 20 dollars calling you out like a million hollers, calling me a hood rat yet you eaten cheese crubs off the floor licking it up like a dirty W****. (LOL only thing I could think of to rhyme with floor ATM also I literally forget like at least 7 more lines of what I was gonna say XD)
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Post by Zoroark » March 8, 2016, 12:42 pm
GalaxyGeri wrote:
Ok guys i cant handle it anymore my turn now to make a poem

Yo, mate i remember when we're kids,
that we never messed with this,
this was evil for us,
and we were afraid from it,
but once we get older,
our think changes a lot,
we get more brave and smart,
we like our talk,
we don't care what other say,
we think we are the king.
But a mature guy says,
that you're nothing accept a human.
This thing is painful, but we don't understand,
it is dangerous, but not if we use it,
it hurts us till to death,
but for is it's too late.


I just made this now from my creative mind ^^!
Everything I've posted so far is random poems I made up on the spot.
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Post by Geri » March 8, 2016, 12:58 pm
Zoroark wrote:
GalaxyGeri wrote:
Ok guys i cant handle it anymore my turn now to make a poem

Yo, mate i remember when we're kids,
that we never messed with this,
this was evil for us,
and we were afraid from it,
but once we get older,
our think changes a lot,
we get more brave and smart,
we like our talk,
we don't care what other say,
we think we are the king.
But a mature guy says,
that you're nothing accept a human.
This thing is painful, but we don't understand,
it is dangerous, but not if we use it,
it hurts us till to death,
but for is it's too late.


I just made this now from my creative mind ^^!
Everything I've posted so far is random poems I made up on the spot.
this is random too
glgy geri

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Post by Zoroark » March 8, 2016, 11:55 pm
GalaxyGeri wrote:
Zoroark wrote:
GalaxyGeri wrote:
Ok guys i cant handle it anymore my turn now to make a poem

Yo, mate i remember when we're kids,
that we never messed with this,
this was evil for us,
and we were afraid from it,
but once we get older,
our think changes a lot,
we get more brave and smart,
we like our talk,
we don't care what other say,
we think we are the king.
But a mature guy says,
that you're nothing accept a human.
This thing is painful, but we don't understand,
it is dangerous, but not if we use it,
it hurts us till to death,
but for is it's too late.


I just made this now from my creative mind ^^!
Everything I've posted so far is random poems I made up on the spot.
this is random too
So what, I'm speaking about the poems I've posted.

You mentioned that the one you made was randomly made on the spot and I was relating to it by replying with that comment.

It seems you misunderstood by the way you worded that, but I won't assume and just leave this post here incase my guess is right.
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Post by Indognito » March 9, 2016, 1:04 pm
I used to be so good at this but now I can't think of any good ones lately, and when I do I forget once I'm ready to type it. this is the 3rd time today that this has happened. XD oh well.

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Post by Gangsta19 » March 10, 2016, 12:32 am
Zoroark wrote:
Comming from the side we ride to victory, pissen over your body while you layen in misery. Last chance to say sorry but I won't accept. My skill is beyond adept, the master of my kind in my prime. While you droppen dimes I'm droppen 20 dollars calling you out like a million hollers, calling me a hood rat yet you eaten cheese crubs off the floor licking it up like a dirty motherfucking WHORE!! :lol: :lol: :lol: :mrgreen: (LOL only thing I could think of to rhyme with floor ATM also I literally forget like at least 7 more lines of what I was gonna say XD don't worry about it,it's just a play on words,i really take no offense,we just fucking around :lol: )
Only thing your crew be riding is my crew's dick homie,i said it once,i'll say it again,you don't really know me,come around my block to pick me up and throw me i'll be back on my feet ripping you apart faster than a paper sheet,your crew are sheep,i'm the big bad wolf,time to terminate,new world order,call me Adolf (no anti- semitism was intended)
I wont apologize,there's nothing to say,i see the fear in your eyes,now it's time to spray the motherfucking AK,bloodbath,we live to this and die for this day by day
better watch what you say,tell yourself everything is going to be ok,but it will not
i won't rest,i won't stop till i catch one of you motherfuckers then it's time to chop chop chop put you in the basement to rot rot rot,so wassap?

THIS IS FUN LOL :lol:

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Post by Zoroark » March 10, 2016, 2:50 am
Gangsta19 wrote:
Zoroark wrote:
Comming from the side we ride to victory, pissen over your body while you layen in misery. Last chance to say sorry but I won't accept. My skill is beyond adept, the master of my kind in my prime. While you droppen dimes I'm droppen 20 dollars calling you out like a million hollers, calling me a hood rat yet you eaten cheese crubs off the floor licking it up like a dirty motherfucking WHORE!! :lol: :lol: :lol: :mrgreen: (LOL only thing I could think of to rhyme with floor ATM also I literally forget like at least 7 more lines of what I was gonna say XD don't worry about it,it's just a play on words,i really take no offense,we just fucking around :lol: )
Only thing your crew be riding is my crew's dick homie,i said it once,i'll say it again,you don't really know me,come around my block to pick me up and throw me i'll be back on my feet ripping you apart faster than a paper sheet,your crew are sheep,i'm the big bad wolf,time to terminate,new world order,call me Adolf (no anti- semitism was intended)
I wont apologize,there's nothing to say,i see the fear in your eyes,now it's time to spray the motherfucking AK,bloodbath,we live to this and die for this day by day
better watch what you say,tell yourself everything is going to be ok,but it will not
i won't rest,i won't stop till i catch one of you motherfuckers then it's time to chop chop chop put you in the basement to rot rot rot,so wassap?

THIS IS FUN LOL :lol:
XD you uncensored my post LOL I didn't expect that. It made me laugh :3 I usually go for disses in my dis raps that make me laugh really. They may seem silly but for me its just fun (LOL no rhyme intended)

You talk about the block like you own a hood, I've seen it and it ain't even good. 4ft 5in slab of concrete is your home, talking about a street you don't even own, your homies won't fight me because my pockets fatter talking about your plastic ak that don't even matter. I don't even need bitches to serve me, I'm a man I'll serve my own platter. You say you'd sprey my blood but all I see is ketchup, are you bluffing? You better fessup. Cops don't even look at me because they see that I'm too G to keep in a prison cell bringing hell to anyone who tries to tell me some bullshit. I even make pigs sit with a quick move of my finger, I creep in the dark like a stank that lingers finding all the info I need to know, killing them with a quick blow to where I know the individual is week, on my feet I'm fast. I don't sleep because I'm stronger torturing my enemies to make their final days longer. Anticipation killing them from the inside, knowing everyday that tomorrow they could die.
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Post by Indognito » March 10, 2016, 3:04 am
Get off of the stage is what your fans say they no like a style that's now lame. You're all washed up and faded away while I'm over here taking your claim. you have nothing left so just leave for the day or for a year cause not even your homies want you here. you're all out of options and I'm flowing with rhymes competing with me is a just waste of your time. I have your hood and I own your fame what your playin now is a mindset game. It's good to reminis but not when you dis because when you compare you ain't got shit. so fess up boy you need to quit, before I wipe you out for good little bitch. the stuff you produce is a walk in the park the one that I own along with my skylark you couldn't even get a meal from charity cause I own that too and you ain't getten any. Leave the hood that you once used to own because I own your world and even your home. you got nothing left and you've been left to fend the self that you owned that's no longer yours. I could go on more but I feel this is enough get your stuff and leave for New York.

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Post by Kevin » March 18, 2016, 10:54 am
'Yeah, yo, what the fuck are the two of you on? Thinking you're great when you're no one. I am the best in this game,
you can't deny it, it's a fact ask Gangsta about it. You're both thinking you can take me? all you can do is flip a table at me
Are you guys really even trying? Guess not, 'cause what you're doing atm is crying. Zoroark, you pokemon loving dude, get the fuck outta this arena dude.
Gangsta, I really like, and I don't want to be the one you cry out to. Goddamn dudes, you're so good at this. But I am even better when I am surrounded by bricks
You tryin' to take a swipe at me? I will make you feel guilty'

I wrote this a while ago, and I didn't and still don't really like it. Gangsta told me to post it here tho, so, why not? :D

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Post by Zoroark » March 18, 2016, 1:34 pm
Kvn wrote:
'Yeah, yo, what the fuck are the two of you on? Thinking you're great when you're no one. I am the best in this game,
you can't deny it, it's a fact ask Gangsta about it. You're both thinking you can take me? all you can do is flip a table at me
Are you guys really even trying? Guess not, 'cause what you're doing atm is crying. Zoroark, you pokemon loving dude, get the fuck outta this arena dude.
Gangsta, I really like, and I don't want to be the one you cry out to. Goddamn dudes, you're so good at this. But I am even better when I am surrounded by bricks
You tryin' to take a swipe at me? I will make you feel guilty'

I wrote this a while ago, and I didn't and still don't really like it. Gangsta told me to post it here tho, so, why not? :D
You don't know who you're talking about, the dude who can perform a one punch knock out, I highly doubt that you can step to be, liven in a creek with yo wack ass self sippin on Capri sun. You won't step to me because you know who already won, I am the one who who beats you down till your done, overrun, in this war only I will have fun, because I defeat all who come, with a simple blow they pay money to see my show no commercials. Skill talks for itself too short to reach the top shelf so I bet you can't even see my face, what a disgrace but I'll put you back into your place and erase your body from existence.


It's decent man :3
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