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Kevin

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Post by Kevin » March 18, 2016, 2:05 pm
It's a bad idea to try and mess with me, competitors fall at my waist, you spit a rhyme I spit in a rhyme's face. Maybe I am dumb, but you're dumber, you're a lumberjack that got stuck in a trap while trying to snap and unwrap his gift in a cab while he's getting flashbacks of his ex-wife who cheated on him with 4 dudes on the same day

Go back into that hole of yours, while I try to control this game, I am aiming at the throne, you're just a clone that was thrown into the abyss because he was dismissed. You are nothing more than a misfit, you're not fit in this place, I am legit, more than you'll ever be, hypocrite.


there's a line that shouts out to a song in here

Zoroark

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Post by Zoroark » March 21, 2016, 3:07 am
You can try but your actions won't succeed, an army of air is the only thing you can lead. You need to take a step back and look at the facts I'm more intact than all of you which is whack. You live in a busted shack because you can't afford the rent of a small apartment. You can't say I'm dumb if your dumber, you need a plumber to plunge the shit out of you because you're full of it. I don't need an army to finish you off so with this fight you better sit. Shits about to get lit and you have nothing to say, getting shot by my glare like a freeze ray because I don't play. Your life's in disarray because of me, can't you see that I'm too g to be beat while your sitting there beaten your meat because you can't pick up your fists to fight like a man. Damn get ready for the slam that will blow you over like Donald trumps combover. Moreover after I'm done, my troops will want a peice and I won't stop them, hit you harder than hate with the dragonrend. (Skyrim reference sort of)



LOL XD I love making these silly raps because I always find a way to laught at either what I wright or the other person wrights. Either way for me it's entertaining. Also not bad dude.
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Post by Gruty » March 21, 2016, 6:43 am
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Kevin

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Post by Kevin » March 21, 2016, 6:46 am
Good one Zoroark, unfortunately I don't have the time to create another verse, I will have to wait 'til the weekend is here.
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Zoroark

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Post by Zoroark » March 21, 2016, 6:50 am
Kvn wrote:
Good one Zoroark, unfortunately I don't have the time to create another verse, I will have to wait 'til the weekend.l is here.
No rush man take all the time you need to reply.
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Post by CopKilla » March 21, 2016, 6:54 am
My phone auto corrects me when I'm trying to write porn to poem lol
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Stephen, you are fucking Irish, you have no education whatsoever, you don't even have the creativity and imagination in your mind to comprehend and show the flat or round shape, you don't have the IQ to even think for such a big planet, as a matter of fact, you are lowering the IQ of lsrcr and greatsan with sonnet are enough already, please stop.
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Post by Aleksa » March 21, 2016, 7:06 am
CopKilla wrote:
My phone auto corrects me when I'm trying to write porn to poem lol
Open twitch, man.

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Post by Zoroark » March 21, 2016, 7:52 am
CopKilla wrote:
My phone auto corrects me when I'm trying to write porn to poem lol
I can make a poem out of that LOL


Porn to poem -[Lsrcr]Zoroark

I tried to typed porn but it turned to poem

It's not fair machine when I'm searching for a hoe you put how

Now I wanna be proper and put fine but you make me say fuck, where is my Luke when o need it, oh shot I meant luck, funk I meant shit and she I meant fuck. I can't never wen


LOL XD
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Post by Indognito » March 22, 2016, 1:57 am
You talk around like you got rep and shit but everybody knows that your are just a little bitch, you think you g but you ain't even close, all you got was the words to your boast, people like you get laid out in the coast because in the hood we don't take no shit so get outta here with those weak ass rhymes ill tell ya like I told the last nigga you just wastin your time, you can't step to me and you can't step to my homies you little punk is about to start owning me tax like wax but yet all you got rats, I don't want none that so get your ass packin stackin them boxes better move fast before you become the past I don't play but you already knew before you started acting like a fool, your days are numbered and the clock is about up better make a move before you lose your life in this fight you know that I'm right so hop on your bike you couldn't even match me with a butchers knife, I waited long enough now it's time to act you better hide cause I'm comin after your ass.




This takes me back to the old days when I used to do this a lot at lunch in school.

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Post by Juice. » March 23, 2016, 2:42 am

is Juice the best with the word gist?
Well son, you talking with a word smith
plus Im flyer than a bird lift
now watch how my words slip
And slide around like cursive!
I can only mess up if I did it on purpose
the rest is so perfect
and I didn't rehearse this.
Its feels like you've heard this
battle me? lol boy its closed curtains!
You'll see more of "defeat"
(the feet) then the curb get.
Im so certain. Im cold..
my words frozen. Im chose...
Thats red ice.. cuz what you just read? ICE.
so Im dead nice like a froze serpent
no soul searching. ik my souls purpose
So its nothing to drop some cold verses.
What you spit sound like old verses...
The old versions...
Oh, Now everybody want to copy, right?
It's because Juice is the blueprint.
I bet you think I want your 2 cents.

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