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Zoroark

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Post by Zoroark » March 23, 2016, 1:25 pm
Can't say your the best when every rhyme is repeated
It doesn't show style, only defeated
Perfect is nothing you can achieve.
Juiced is what I'll call you unless you like orange pee.
Only flyer I see is "help I need" with yo name on it requestin.
You ain't slick you just small time, gone with a flick not even a smith and Wesson.
Worse than in LSRCR noob whose blind, do you even possess a mind?
I could drop a dime and buy better lyrics than that, messing up on purpose is only an opinion not a fact, pride don't win a battle, only gets you rattled, when it's disturbed. Your veins get ruptured and you die, on the floor you lie a victim to your own demise.
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Juice.

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Post by Juice. » March 23, 2016, 5:47 pm
I tell you why you so easy to puncture.
Its cause you write weak bars with no structure.
So now ima make you suffer you buster
you not tough.. you a lover, a sucker
a runner a ducker, im a gunner, a hunter
usually n a benz or a hummer
while you and your friends n ur brother
stuck on a hot bus or a train for the summer.
ask your ex gf Im getting brain for the summer
Like all jokes aside... she gettin slained for the summer
I'll reach my arm out the window n let it bang out the hummer.
cuz i got a gun so big it shoot bullets the size of cucumbers
i send a few hundred and watch ur crew crumble
and no one will recognize u, even your mother
The feds going to be like we need a hair sample
man ur flow is long and plain like air travel.
and u broke so thats not even a 1st class flight
but ima put you n that hearse mad nice
and neat but i know its sad right
well itz gona be a sad night
just kidding
no one care about this fags life.
So I had to put em n this bag twice...
Its probably time to go get some swag...
right?

lol Body bag. Your Life
Oh, Now everybody want to copy, right?
It's because Juice is the blueprint.
I bet you think I want your 2 cents.

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Zoroark

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Post by Zoroark » March 24, 2016, 2:09 am
So weak couldn't even hold a gun, should I kill you? No that ain't fun.
I'll just watch you struggle
The only thing you do is snuggle the rifle.
The clip ain't even loaded and your words are all bloated. Your homies are thin and all full of holes, didn't even call for backup I finished them off on my own, is that I toy sword? shit, you're supposed to be grown. You couldn't drop a penny without takin a loan, when you get shot you moan than start screaming in pain, I don't even have nothing to gain but laughter. You didnt even survive you got slaughtered, your vision is altered to make you think you can win but you can't beat the kingpin of the streets. Even with round 2 you'll taste defeat. Won't even take a week for you to reap death no. Perdition Is waiting for you, you'll go without a clue of your impeding demise. None will rise when you die, none will cry since no one cares about the. Go and weep knowing nothing you seek will be obtained.
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Naruk

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Post by Naruk » March 24, 2016, 3:03 am
Stop this fucking nonsense, you all nothing but a comedy show
You all talk about shit, not knowing yourselves are shits
All of you should go to your respective home, open the door and have yourself a roam
In case you guys forgotten the fact that you're kids, open your eyes not just your eyelids!
Instead of holding a gun which gives you your own meaning of fun
You should go suck your fingers and have some run
Enjoy your childhood, eat your food, and have yoirselves a stable mood
You can't be kids forever, but if you can, I'm sure your brains have an incurable fever.
It's time for you grow up to be a man and work like an ant, not ike these you've grown like a censored
"LIfe is fair because it is unfair to everyone."

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Naruk

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Post by Naruk » March 24, 2016, 3:12 am
Los Santos Roleplay Cops and Robbers, I don't know what special with this among al the servers.
It's a server of a trash, no offense sorry for being too rash
Gameplay isn't that of quality, actualy it's like a calamity
The script is nothing but a bowl of shit, mixed with urine, I really don't know why this is such a big hit
The community is gross, immature faggotic cunts compose, what a very big losa
Admins, as I observed are dumbs and are stupid as bumbs
I myself, am one of the community, infecting, screeching, and fucking the totality
The server I want to vanish, or "borrar" in spanish
I want to bomb the owner for creating such a mess, no worries to the father I'll just confess
Now believe me, what I said was all true, it just didn't come out from the blue
But sad thing, a fire must have been lit? Don't worry, everything I said was the opposite

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Naruk </3
"LIfe is fair because it is unfair to everyone."

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Juice.

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Post by Juice. » March 27, 2016, 12:12 am
both of yall kind of weak
you rap like some kind of geeks :geek:
the type who always tryin to speak.
And always claiming that they street.
always saying you holding heat.
when rly no one knows you creeps.
So i had to expose these bleeps!
for all of the lies they keep
so soon as they try to speak
I put the fo five to they cheek
n provide the sky with these freaks.
In my hood.. they wont survive a week.
ask the police, we still playin hide n seek.

Yo "bars" aint got a "shot"...
thats a "Sober" flow
Its ironic how my bars hot
but I got the colder flow.
Its cause im something u not
and I'm sure you know
I can even take ur thot.
And mold her, Oprah show.
So go get focused bro
ps Im still winning lol
Spoiler: show


Oh, Now everybody want to copy, right?
It's because Juice is the blueprint.
I bet you think I want your 2 cents.

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Post by Indognito » March 28, 2016, 7:13 am
What the fuck is this? Is it what you call rap? Nigga in the hood we call that crap. I got a little something called style and flow the best of the best but you already know, that when I roll I put on a show, so you can take that shit and accept my death blow, you have no room to gloat, besides that all ya got is a few pea shooters you better get low cause I got an army that's about to go, to your house and screw with you so don't think you can run or hide cause I wherever you run to ill blow it sky high, to expose the lies you've been tellin for years. Pissin you off and grinding your gears. You little kid is all talk and no walk next time when you arrive you better at least come with a glock cause it'll take a death to keep me from your block. But hay you already fought and had to take a loss so if your smart you'll end yourself to save me from the trouble, and can already have it dealt, you played the wrong cards in the game called life you're the only person who brought this on yourself.

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Post by Geri » March 28, 2016, 12:40 pm
Reading all those ''raps'',
mate you know i don't wanna laugh,
but for real what the fuck is this,
this is like a Jack London story,
if you wanna hear a real rap,
read to this and stop typing crap,
you know you are fool enough,
because you are just reading a rap,
i think i really suck on this,
anyways i try to dismiss,
because i need this fucking rhyme,
anyways imma end it here,
because i don't know what to type here,
please make sure to like comment and subscribe,
i am just joking,
ok thanks bye!
glgy geri

Juice.

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Post by Juice. » March 29, 2016, 3:58 am
Juice. wrote:


So u think u should talk like you bad right?
until u get hit with the left hook then a jab right?
Testing my flow gona land u in that bag tight.
my bars like every good time you had, Im past nice!
My punches? I got the heaviest left and a fast right
u know what you are and it rhymes with "past life"
and that would explain why you still talking crap right?
I read so many trash writes, it must be scrap night!
lol Im playing. Your raps only get put out on trash night.
And if you run up on me I "wood fire" like its "camp night"
I will own every fool infront of me like its samp night lol
yea I really laughed, sike! I'll hit you with the gat pipe
you bag pipes, you little boys, so you better act right!
cuz once im done with u, then ima make your dad fight.


So you stopping who? Dude.. I'm the Juice!
You two are just the fruits. while Im the proof!
when I'm in the boothe, so please dont try me
or lie G or "hi" me cuz im the truth like I'm Tyree.
I gave you all "hot rounds" like a pie be.
next. Im giving more if i shoot it like I'm Kyrie
oops I did it again.. it's another homi
I'll have to destroy evidence and toss the Tommy!!!
I gota go. ima call the cops n tell em to pick up the bodies.


Oh, Now everybody want to copy, right?
It's because Juice is the blueprint.
I bet you think I want your 2 cents.

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Indognito

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Post by Indognito » March 29, 2016, 7:47 am
Nigga what is this? You copying and pastin? That's is what's called wastin yo time, because that right there has already died. The ryme was whack and the lyracs where lame, copying and pasting means you've lost the game, the battle is over and you've already lost there's no point in pretending your boss, because that disclaim comes with a cost, the hole that goes deeper then your pockets can hold and you've already been provin to be joke, so wake up boy this shits getting old.
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