Poem

[Naruk]

OOC: Lol too many grammaritical errors and typos. Sorry, using mobile Hahaha, I really laughed at your point where you thought I had to google all of this hahahahahahahaha, same situation as telling me I keybinds

[Indognito]

This type of rap is what is known as whack, get off the stage because it's like a trap for fake niggas who fall for it like that, a snap of the fingers and you can't get back, up on your feet, it's time for you to bleed my lyrics are like an AK just feedin led, right into the back of your head this ain't no game and the stage ain't for fake, only real niggas get on tape, this little boy needs to wake out of bed, but you can't when you're dead, you're wife is not missin you cause she's givin me head. You seem to act like you got style but your own crew kicked you outta the 8 mile, you ain't got a dime to even call police, you where late on last months lease, now you ain't got nothing left, get outta here boy cause you can't even step now nothing else needs to be said you've been debunked and left resting under the stone head.

[Zoroark]

Off topic

I expected this topic to die before page 3 when I originally posted it XD

I bumped it only because I had material for the bump that one time. XD

Won't let it die without at least 20 pages,i've been waiting for a topic like this for years


OT:

Walking the streets of Los Santos
Chilling in Grove colors,shooting up some Vagos
We run the streets,but moved out of the Ghettos
Up North we also run the casinos
But don't stick your nose,
where it doesn't belong
Business is business,you'll be dead wrong
If you think otherwise or try to act the "smart guys"
Assassins in disguise as one of your very own guys
By the sound of a gun
Will take away the life of your loved one
In front of your very own eyes,so be advised
Self made men from the streets of Ganton
Coming over to drive by you,while speakers blasting "Straight 'outta Compton"
You'll be lucky if you survive,better dive to the ground when you hear the sound
And watch your hood son,cause we're taking it over
Don't get caught walking the wrong street
Or you'll run the street of 'no leaf clover'
Once you hear the TEC 9 spray,it's 'GAME OVER'

The funny thing is the topic was not intended for rap battles but it's whatever XD it is still on topic since tecnally it's a poem :3

[Zoroark]

poem is not a poem without a rhyme.

This is not necessarily true. Poems don't have to rhyme, however a rap does because of the type of poem it is. There is more than one type of poems.

[Naruk]

Of course I know, but the actual, and the main style of poem is about rhyming. It was just a rebut directing that their poem was not even a poem, ICly.

[Naruk]

"but your rhymes are googled"...

[Naruk]

How about we record and really rap this? I could if you guys also would. Just be sure you got a nice and clear accent unlike those of the western asian people, Just kidddiiing hahaha. Yeah, I assure you my accent's clear and sound.

[Zoroark]

I don't like being recorded or people taking photos of me along with a few other things. I don't even have any acccent like that.

[Indognito]

I don't like being recorded or people taking photos of me along with a few other things. I don't even have any acccent like that.

[Juice.]

I deliver rhymes you want to rewind...
Thats rememberable...
Soon as I chime, Im slicker than slime.
Packed with some chemicals.
I stop on the dime, Yes I can stop time.
Raps unforgettable...
Yo bars sick like mine? No dude its a crime.
I need some minerals!!
The stars realign, Cause a star has arrived.
That's the minimum...
Its bars all in mine, metaphors in line.
crashing synonyms!!!
Punchlines hitting fine, got u drunk, no wine
massive penmanship...
And no u cant hide, You'll get clock 2 times.
That's a pendulum!


just watch how my gear cause fear
before that clip pop
Its clear you spit weird around here
Juice hands that Hip Hop!!
its time to get numb£r$ and cheers!
Ooooh this a sick plot...
I did it just to STOP TIME, cause my bars Tip Top!!! Tip Top!!!

Like a 15 year old with a fake ID
I got passed your bars..
Its like i pick locks!!
I said, clock, pendulum, gears, watch
hands, numbers, and then STOPPED
"time" because I been hot.
All my rhymes the BOMB!!!
ITS GOING TICK TOCK! TICK TOCK!!!


Yep that about does it fellas.. GAMEOVER