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Santiago

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Post by Santiago » April 1, 2016, 11:30 pm
Juice. wrote:
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EWB vs Juice

Remember?
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killdahobo99 wrote:
Santiago wrote:
fuck u
listen here u fucking mexican little turd. I will molest you in the mouth while your dog watches and then I'll fuck your dog while you watch.

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Post by Juice. » April 1, 2016, 11:50 pm
Santiago wrote:

EWB vs Juice

Remember?
yea fun times lol we had a good battle and I took the win but some ppl debated it but if it were today I'd pull a can so long, he'll think it must shoot pringles... But I rather pull the blade n let his face mingle... I show em its more than one way to be scarface ask Al Pacino.


He cool lol he has some bars.
Oh, Now everybody want to copy, right?
It's because Juice is the blueprint.
I bet you think I want your 2 cents.

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Post by Indognito » April 2, 2016, 1:24 am
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I deliver rhymes you want to rewind...
Thats rememberable...
Soon as I chime, Im slicker than slime.
Packed with some chemicals.
I stop on the dime, Yes I can stop time.
Raps unforgettable...
Yo bars sick like mine? No dude its a crime.
I need some minerals!!
The stars realign, Cause a star has arrived.
That's the minimum...
Its bars all in mine, metaphors in line.
crashing synonyms!!!
Punchlines hitting fine, got u drunk, no wine
massive penmanship...
And no u cant hide, You'll get clock 2 times.
That's a pendulum!


just watch how my gear cause fear
before that clip pop
Its clear you spit weird around here
Juice hands that Hip Hop!!
its time to get numb£r$ and cheers!
Ooooh this a sick plot...
I did it just to STOP TIME, cause my bars Tip Top!!! Tip Top!!!

Like a 15 year old with a fake ID
I got passed your bars..
Its like i pick locks!!
I said, clock, pendulum, gears, watch
hands, numbers, and then STOPPED
"time" because I been hot.
All my rhymes the BOMB!!!
ITS GOING TICK TOCK! TICK TOCK!!!


Yep that about does it fellas.. GAMEOVER


You say the game is over but it's only just begun, if you took a look you would see that's I've already won but that's how it has to be done, you claim that you're G but you ain't got a gun hay get back here the fun has just started when you're aginst me your rymes look retarded and I ain't the type of nigga to feel pity or get soft harted when your face is pushed aginst the 4.5 inch slab of concrete, that's what happens when you try to step me I ain't the type to get greedy I've already gifted you the first bullet in the chamber. now the whole hood knows you are lamer then the lamer, don't step to me because I'm a lion tamer. But the fame isn't what I'm after it's a thing called real nigga that keep getting faker and faker when thay let those like you be they're taker. show some heart and show some class if you are missin out on that you'll be the person who comes last, the cars I drive go top speed 200 fast.

Note: this ain't my best. But here. XD

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Post by Juice. » April 3, 2016, 5:09 am


If u cold, they lying. who say you nice?
People quote my bars like "Yo J.. U ICE."
So far I've beat what u just said like twice. lol
I'm quick to fit your body in that hole like mice.
Another straight haymaker,
so say nite nite. You taking the night flight,
you scared unless mom turn on a nite light.
You wanted to lose. so Juice the right fight.
I got the win(d), my rhymes flyer than kite life.
before you test me. learn how to rhyme right.
I bet when youre in my sight, you get your mind right.
tech with the green laser, I'll put you in the lime light.


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Oh, Now everybody want to copy, right?
It's because Juice is the blueprint.
I bet you think I want your 2 cents.

:P: :RIGHTS; :O:
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Post by Gangsta19 » April 3, 2016, 6:04 pm

J-U-ICE imma crucify you like Jesus Christ
Get your soul stoled and call it a diamond heist
Lock you up in the attic and feed you mice
Pick you up from there and throw you like a pair of dice
Send you straight to Paradise cause my aim is precise
You'll pay the price of messing with the wrong guys
Finger jab into your eyes,your vision i sacrifice
You can predict where this outcome lies
I'm hired to take fake ass gangsters' lives
In this case,a strategic retread would be wise
The next guy you'll get to meet won't be this nice
So be advised!
note: the only reason i "lashed out at you" is,i wanna see what kind of a respond you'll have for this xD

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Post by Juice. » April 3, 2016, 10:00 pm

Yeah you right. Stealing my soul is a diamond heist.
And thats why your body going in dirt. Thats the miners life.
You came for a minor fight but getting burned like I fire fight.

Ima show you why you not as nice.

You said.. You going to crucify me like Jesus Christ?
I "wood" have said you get "nailed" if I queeze the pipe
because if you "cross" me tryna retrieve a life
Ima put "thorns" in your head like you Jesus Christ.
Boy you need the pipe. Fiending for the weed at night.
You need to write... thinking you can rap with me.
Honestly? you think I didnt expect that blasphemy?
Well expect this casualty that ends as a catastrophe.

The scope on the rifle big enough to see Mars.
And the gun so big it tried losing weight on dancing with the stars!
So once we pull up in C.A.R's. with atleast 8 cars. You really gon see AR's.
You play GANGSTER but we are. Your troopers fake rangers like VR
If they dont all die then Ima put the rest of his GANG ST. in the E.R.




look up vr troopers.. they were fake power rangers loll mann oh man.
Oh, Now everybody want to copy, right?
It's because Juice is the blueprint.
I bet you think I want your 2 cents.

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Post by Zoroark » April 3, 2016, 10:19 pm
A poem (unnamed)

Where does life begin? When I was born or from my mother within?
Was it my first breath or was I considered dead?
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Indognito

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Post by Indognito » April 3, 2016, 11:45 pm
Juice. wrote:


If u cold, they lying. who say you nice?
People quote my bars like "Yo J.. U ICE."
So far I've beat what u just said like twice. lol
I'm quick to fit your body in that hole like mice.
Another straight haymaker,
so say nite nite. You taking the night flight,
you scared unless mom turn on a nite light.
You wanted to lose. so Juice the right fight.
I got the win(d), my rhymes flyer than kite life.
before you test me. learn how to rhyme right.
I bet when youre in my sight, you get your mind right.
tech with the green laser, I'll put you in the lime light.


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a strait haymaker? It felt like the wind there was no substance it just felt like a win, the shit you say is nothing but lame because it's just all talk but I got walk, the name isn't fame but shankin is the game last time you stepped you realized I wasn't tame, you ain't ice cold you nothin but old "carzy mother fucker" is my name in bold "strait outta Compton" is the rep I hold, you can't step to a nigga you don't know, stripes is what I'm takin and skills is what I'm makin, you can't stop a train with you're makeshift bike so like you're mom warned you stay outta sight because that's the only way you can stay alive, if I find you the danger level will rise, for all I know you'll shit and cry, nigga your lyracs have dry, your lame raps are makin me high, I'm getten paied ether way if you lie cause I own the PD the one where you were seen droppen them dimes. hay I just came to say hi but it's more then that, time to die.
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Post by Naruk » April 3, 2016, 11:57 pm
lame
"LIfe is fair because it is unfair to everyone."

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Post by Indognito » April 4, 2016, 12:10 am
Naruk wrote:
lame

says the person who has to use google to get rhymes.
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