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Post by Safwan_theboss » April 4, 2016, 12:43 am
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Post by Gangsta19 » April 4, 2016, 8:49 am
Juice. wrote:

Yeah you right. Stealing my soul is a diamond heist.
And thats why your body going in dirt. Thats the miners life.
You came for a minor fight but getting burned like I fire fight.

Ima show you why you not as nice.

You said.. You going to crucify me like Jesus Christ?
I "wood" have said you get "nailed" if I queeze the pipe
because if you "cross" me tryna retrieve a life
Ima put "thorns" in your head like you Jesus Christ.
Boy you need the pipe. Fiending for the weed at night.
You need to write... thinking you can rap with me.
Honestly? you think I didnt expect that blasphemy?
Well expect this casualty that ends as a catastrophe.

The scope on the rifle big enough to see Mars.
And the gun so big it tried losing weight on dancing with the stars!
So once we pull up in C.A.R's. with atleast 8 cars. You really gon see AR's.
You play GANGSTER but we are. Your troopers fake rangers like VR
If they dont all die then Ima put the rest of his GANG ST. in the E.R.




look up vr troopers.. they were fake power rangers loll mann oh man.
Damn right i'm fire,play around and you get burned like touching a naked wire
Hot enough to melt Hell,take over Satan's throne and have you dwell,on my regime
Put 66 bullets in you and another 6 by my buddy Azeem,never see me fleeing you can call me a superhuman being shoot you with a UV beam the color of the fallen one makes you scream,in agony if you're no friend of me you're an enemy,please don't be,otherwise i won't have any mercy,meditating like Joseph Murphy,healer of cancer cause i'm in control of my own destiny i don't need theology,been near death you can't brainwash me or indoctrinate me,so what if i use a little blasphemy?
I cannot offend a being that has no EGO,but there we go label me as evil and i might as well become the 'Devil' cause my soul is the seed of a rebel you're a conformist,your third eye is blind from the mist you put into it,there's no denying it,i still smoke cannabis,still throw you with a left hook on the canvas,but don't forget i'm still the Albanian with a gun and 'PLIS' (look it up lol) and if you make the situation 'pis' (translate it) i'll hunt down your whole 'fis' (translate it too)


ps. Juice still has it,damn! after all these years he still got it hahah


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Post by Robin » April 4, 2016, 8:55 am
This is a very interesting topic, keep it going guys!
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Post by Geri » April 4, 2016, 5:49 pm
i ask my self how many pages will this be after 10 years.
50k?
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Post by Indognito » April 4, 2016, 5:57 pm
I ain't letting this topic die until it at least gets up to 30 pages. Even though I don't post my best stuff here it's nice to have a little competition with those who put at least decant rhymes down.

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Post by Zoroark » April 4, 2016, 6:35 pm
GalaxyGeri wrote:
i ask my self how many pages will this be after 10 years.
50k?
More than 30 of your topics combined LOL
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Post by Indognito » April 4, 2016, 11:08 pm
The game of life is a game we all play it isn't fun or easy in anyway, make the most of it cause time is short, you never know when you'll have to abort, the missions come on the unexpected, you never know when you'll get drafted, into one you don't fully agree with, it's full of choices that don't stand to reason but if you don't comply people will claim treason, even though you are doing what you can they will take you for even your land, they type of shit that goes on from day to day make sure you don't delay stay true to yourself and push away the hate because those people don't know how to appreciate, they point at the bad even if it's in such few numbers just keep doing good even if it's picking up lumber.

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Post by Juice. » April 5, 2016, 4:14 pm


Im too real with it, i ain't gota blast da fifth.
All my joints hot, With "presence" that's how I "rap the gift."

no I said...
All my "joints hot", with "presents" that's how I "wrap the gift"
and nigga all my goons weapons got banana clips.
Your body getting buried under the pasture quick.
Lyrically you rappin with a crafted gift masked in hits.
That's why my bars feel like I'm stomping you out in canvas's
I just read your raps and laugh at it.
Thinking how you going on the damaged list.
Smack who said rap is something you savage with.
You can write til your fingers get callusus, and you'd still find no way to challenge this..

Im a doctor and you're a patient..
This a rhyme exam, dont keep me waiting.
It looks fun but you can't speak the language.
Your rhymes more like geeks and fake ships. With leaks and gape pits, like u wear cleats and space fits, who really believe this gay chick? oh you? Then you not gon make it! I put a gun to yo face quick, The gun on his face. CLICK!!
He'll be surprised, before he dies
look like he had a face lift!
So forget about rap, dont even write em.
Most of it bore me and I don't like em.
Cause if u battle me its a " loss in store" like they sold your item. The only way your rhymes beating me is if I write em.
Oh, Now everybody want to copy, right?
It's because Juice is the blueprint.
I bet you think I want your 2 cents.

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Post by Indognito » April 5, 2016, 7:35 pm
Juice. wrote:


Im too real with it, i ain't gota blast da fifth.
All my joints hot, With "presence" that's how I "rap the gift."

no I said...
All my "joints hot", with "presents" that's how I "wrap the gift"
and nigga all my goons weapons got banana clips.
Your body getting buried under the pasture quick.
Lyrically you rappin with a crafted gift masked in hits.
That's why my bars feel like I'm stomping you out in canvas's
I just read your raps and laugh at it.
Thinking how you going on the damaged list.
Smack who said rap is something you savage with.
You can write til your fingers get callusus, and you'd still find no way to challenge this..

Im a doctor and you're a patient..
This a rhyme exam, dont keep me waiting.
It looks fun but you can't speak the language.
Your rhymes more like geeks and fake ships. With leaks and gape pits, like u wear cleats and space fits, who really believe this gay chick? oh you? Then you not gon make it! I put a gun to yo face quick, The gun on his face. CLICK!!
He'll be surprised, before he dies
look like he had a face lift!
So forget about rap, dont even write em.
Most of it bore me and I don't like em.
Cause if u battle me its a " loss in store" like they sold your item. The only way your rhymes beating me is if I write em.


I don't need your rhymes to even scratch the surface, cause anything you produce ain't even worth it, nothing you got is even up to g the stuff you got came from back allies, you don't even write your own rhymes you get others to give you hype, stick to school cause what you made shows you're a tool, the fact that you're still at it makes you look like a fool, the sound of snap was you're neck last night, last thing you heard was dis nigga can't fight, hide behind your crew, hide behind your weapon all that tells me is you can't get to steppin, but a crowbar to the face and you'll start the confession now that's you've suffered enough I'mma get my smithen Weston, no point in keepin you alive once you've learnt your lesson, after the example was set your crew left cause they know not to mess with, the person who's taken out the lesser, it's a dirty job and my hands are just gonna get messier, you say my rhymes bore you cause you ain't alive to see them, the shit you say sounds more like rhyme treason, you couldn't even match up to my flow cause the stuff you got ain't even dope, I don't need blunts cause I smoked you Holmes, I smoked you so hard that you had to hold the phone, and you the only one that's like a fake ship the only time I was wet was when yo girl jumped on my dick so think twice you jumped up little kid, you claim I can't challenge this but I already did I won that shit and made you quit because the shit I produce is more then just lit, so say what ya want I've already ended this, you claim you're real but you've proven you're fake, that's why your own friends found you in a lake, along with your rap sheet that wasn't worth the take, wasn't worth a dime, the shit that you write is a waste of your time, by now you should know that I ain't even kind to little niggas who can't even rhyme.


note: I fixed a few issues with this that I didn't see before, like me was placed instead of my. other then stuff like that it's still the same thing.
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Post by Gangsta19 » April 6, 2016, 12:59 am
COURAGE

Once you comprehend the power from within
You don't even have to pretend like you want to win
You're just messing around with them you can freely rap circles around them
And by the time they get it, it's too late,you've found them,surround them,you clown them
Got them on your hands and you don't spear them,you tear them
You no longer fear them,you just appear in front of them
Show them that you're on a different level,your back is guarded by this Devil
Your heart beats rebel,your soul doesn't settle,body needs no metal
And that's why they envy you,cause you don't need a crew
One man army,they're tiny from your point of view
And they feel so blue cause they don't have the slightest clue
Of the power that lies deep inside of you
Brother open your eyes,coz' these snakes in disguise are bound to spread lies
To make you doubt in yourself,but when you realize that you're a notch from the top shelf
You value yourself enough to not fall for it,when you're high like this you can't afford to fore-fit,you stick with it until they quit or you'd have enough and cut with the bullshit:
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Cranium twisted,the only shot they had ,boy.....they missed it
Omnipotent ,they fear you cos' you're different
Using only ten percent of the
Rage from deep within
Annihilating them with the evil grin
Godlike powers misused for sin
Everybody bows their head,but you raise your chin
COURAGE for the win!


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