Application Of Intrest - Crave Hogan

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Letter Head:
Subject: Application Of Intrest - Crave Hogan

Address:
La Famiglia Assassini Pagati
1 Blueberry Ave.
Blueberry
Los Santos
LS52 3BZ



Letter Body: Hello all . My real name is ( Mahmoud ) . My name in Famiglia Assanssini Pagati is Crave Hogan . i work to join best groups in the server . i heard about La Famiglia Assassini Pagati.. i am very good in Role play . i am 16 Old years . i am in 3 prep so . I am from in Egypt ( Bani Swaif ) . Today i finished my exams and i am very happy . i play football with best team and i will be good . Now at this days i will open my computer many times and i will be active in game 24 hours . i am didn't like school but i want to be good people in the future and want to be in very good join to be have wife and my family . i life with me father and my mother . i have 1 Brother and 2 Sister . There are bigger than me . i am smallest one in my family . My brother will be army after 1years and i hope to be Army in real to help my City ( EGYPT ) . I am good people so i want to do that and be army . My father have 57 years old but he is not very big in old . All my family still life and i love that . I will find job after some days to get money . Thanks for reading my application . i hope it goes will .

Return Address:
La Famiglia Assassini Pagati
1 Blueberry Ave.
Blueberry
Los Santos
LS52 3BZ


Phone Number : 115-8957-804

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[[Lsrcr]Oggy]

*The letter is still in Crave Hogan's possession.

((Besides, you've made many roleplay mistakes in your application. Also, you need to put more effort on the letter body.
Good luck next time. You may re-apply after a week [12/07/2017]. ))