S.W.A.T Application: ObeseWhale

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ObeseWhale

ObeseWhale
Posts: 3
Joined: July 28, 2013, 8:39 am

Post by ObeseWhale » July 28, 2013, 8:07 pm
In-Game Name: [ObeseWhale]

Score: [507]

Your Timezone (GMT): [(UTC-03:00) Brasilia]

/taze Score: [Rank: 14]

/ar Score: [Rank: 16]

Proof of Score: Image

Proof of Status:
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Reason: Because I want to give more, help stop criminals .. make the city safer and Serving people.. Make myself more good than im now, Know more people and do a best work everyday, Im good as everything so i think i can be a Perfect Ej of a good Swat, As you can See i dont have Much Score and Much Arrest's, Its cuz i was "Killing" the "Red" Person's (Criminal's), Its my Pleasure to Present me in This Thread..
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Ger

Ger
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Location: Argentina

Post by Ger » July 28, 2013, 8:15 pm
Your reason needs to be at least 4 lines long.
You have 24 hours to fix it.

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Brooklyn

Brooklyn
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Joined: July 3, 2012, 3:28 pm

Post by Brooklyn » July 28, 2013, 9:48 pm
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stats says enough that your not active as cop and you don't have experience

Ps: fix your apply reason needs 4 lines like Ger says.

ObeseWhale

ObeseWhale
Posts: 3
Joined: July 28, 2013, 8:39 am

Post by ObeseWhale » July 28, 2013, 10:06 pm
Brooklyn wrote:
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stats says enough that your not active as cop and you don't have experience

Ps: fix your apply reason needs 4 lines like Ger says.
Ah? im not Active? I joined in the Server like 1 week ago :o

Ger

Ger
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Post by Ger » July 29, 2013, 9:39 pm
ObeseWhale wrote:
Brooklyn wrote:
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stats says enough that your not active as cop and you don't have experience

Ps: fix your apply reason needs 4 lines like Ger says.
Ah? im not Active? I joined in the Server like 1 week ago :o
Can you explain us how you earned 500 points in 1 week with only 20 gameplay hours?

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ObeseWhale

ObeseWhale
Posts: 3
Joined: July 28, 2013, 8:39 am

Post by ObeseWhale » July 29, 2013, 10:05 pm
Ger wrote:
Can you explain us how you earned 500 points in 1 week with only 20 gameplay hours?
I Got it as Itemseller, Weaponseller, shooting being cop from vehicles (Killing), you have my stats in the 1st comment, I got this new score: in not much than 2 hours
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Aka

Aka
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Location: Balkan power

Post by Aka » July 29, 2013, 10:37 pm
poor reason
bad status


Negative

P.S: fix ur apply
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Esi mi dobarrrrrr?
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pogledam dole kad ono isto sisa

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BoSS

BoSS
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Post by BoSS » July 30, 2013, 12:50 am
Two (2) days have passed and your reason is still not four lines long.

Aleksa

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Post by Aleksa » July 30, 2013, 5:26 am
Ger wrote:
Your reason needs to be at least 4 lines long.
You have 24 hours to fix it.
Ger's post: 28 Jul 2013, 21:15 ( GMT + 0 )
Today, it's: 30 July 2013, 6:26am ( GMT + 0 )

*Sunday*

Sunday
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Post by *Sunday* » July 31, 2013, 3:45 pm
Denied.

You didn't fix your application in time.
Besides that you're too new and inexperienced. 1 week is not enough to learn everything regarding the server. You should spend more time on the server before re-applying.

You may re-apply in 2 weeks ( 14th August ).
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